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Alright everyone, this is the first time I try anything like this so any type of criticism is highly appreciated. Since this is the first time I try anything like this I'd like to be placed in the NEW category for the contest.
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:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Vision
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star: Impact

Yay! <img src="e.deviantart.com/emoticons/b/b…" width="15" height="15" alt=":D" title=":D (Big Grin)" />

The idea is very cute and the expression on his face is just adorable! <img src="e.deviantart.com/emoticons/a/a…" width="15" height="15" alt=":aww:" title="Aww" />

To be a first time you've done a great job on the shading. You've grasped the basic idea of shading with dithering and it all looks quite good ^^ Also nice touch with the shine in his eyes, and the different highlights on his face. <img src="e.deviantart.com/emoticons/n/n…" width="15" height="15" alt=":nod:" title="Nod" />

One thing that you could improve on is getting the right contrast between each shade of red. Between some shades there is a big difference, and between others the difference is very small. Having an equal amount of contrast between each color will help in making it look much smoother. <img src="e.deviantart.com/emoticons/s/s…" width="15" height="15" alt=":)" title=":) (Smile)" />

Other than that I think this is a great entry for the contest.
Good luck! <img src="e.deviantart.com/emoticons/a/a…" width="15" height="15" alt=":aww:" title="Aww" /><img class="avatar" src="a.deviantart.com/avatars/t/h/t…" alt=":iconthumbplz:" title="thumbplz"/>