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So a friend of mine, Simon aka. ~Chaosbrazer on dA wanted me to make some tshirt designs for a business he and his friends want to start. :eager:

They wanted the designs to have a musical theme. One of the concerns they had when I showed them this design is that people may not be able to identify it as a musical note. So that's why I'm posting it here. Did you guys instantly recognize it as a musical note? And is recognizable from far away? :paranoid:

I'd really appreciate it if anyone could comment on those things. And just general criticism is ofcourse as always very much appreciated! :)
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:icondreamydeb:
Dreamydeb Featured By Owner May 3, 2011   General Artist
Lovely color scheme, stimulating design! :iconshinyheartplz:
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Brownie97 Featured By Owner Feb 26, 2011  Student General Artist
I think this T-shirt is very original! The fact that the musical note is made of many different instruments will greatly improve feedback and interest for your T-shirt business! Also, the very nice chosal of contrasting colours, in this case black and hot colours like yellow and red, are very appealing. Keep up the good work!
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Brownie97 Featured By Owner Feb 26, 2011  Student General Artist
If you want this as a critique, then tell me so! I'd be very glad to satisfy your need of critique!
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graphiqual Featured By Owner Jan 23, 2011  Student Interface Designer
Absolutely recognizable! And great design as well :D
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frisbii Featured By Owner Jan 16, 2011  Student Interface Designer
Yes, I can definitely tell it's a musical note without suggestion.

From far away the...arms...downstroke..microphone cord part looks too skinny, I think.
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hayesgeneration Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2011  Hobbyist Photographer
Simon's been using me as a test subject, AKA, he's been showing me some of the stuff you've done. You're really talented, keep it up!
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Chaosbrazer Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2011
And so far 2/2 other test subjects has seemed to agree
I'd say those are some pretty substantial results so far :dummy:
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PatrickRuegheimer Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2011   Photographer
Yep I saw it directly. :#1:

Good job. :thumbsup:
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ashelynn Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2011  Professional General Artist
:sing:recognizable to me as a music note; and from afar, my husband recognizes it as a double eighth note, but suggests firming up the lines a bit (not necessarily border lines in any way, just the microphone / cord lines):cd:
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SinArtist Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2011  Student Artist
really kool
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j-2d Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I too thought it was a note of musicalness, I showed it to someone else and they thought the same. Some people at first glance may do a double take but I think they would get it in no time after.
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SparklyDest Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2011  Hobbyist Artisan Crafter
I instantly saw music note. :nod: It looks really good. :)
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Blue-Berry-Boy Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
I didn't notice right away....
but I'm kinda slow like that :shrug:
I would suggest adding more cords... maybe one connecting to the electrical guitar on the left?
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mushir Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2011
Not a bad idea actually! Thanks man! :D
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:iconblue-berry-boy:
Blue-Berry-Boy Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
No problem :)
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Artic-Blue Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I would buy that shirt. :omg:
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:iconmushir:
mushir Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2011
Hopefully others think so too! :eager:
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:iconchaosbrazer:
Chaosbrazer Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2011
One day you might be able to! :dummy:
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tomato-bitil Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2011
I could tell it was a musical note! :eager: And it looks great! :D

Very nice. :clap:
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mushir Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2011
Thanks for responding! :D
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tomato-bitil Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2011
You're welcome. :D
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Chaosbrazer Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2011
Schwe 8D
Very much recognizable actually, good stuff :dummy:
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mushir Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2011
:dummy:
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